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lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
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It draws me in powerfully then leaves me a little off kilter at the end—Guilty, perhaps.

avasogentlyavasogentlyover 13 years ago
Alluring Visual

This poem reminds me of my ambivalence toward surrendering to passion the first time I was physically intimate with someone after suffering a traumatic breakup. Your verse is effusive yet restrained, a beautifully envisioned contrast.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE BLUSH OF THE INNOCENTS

when a ribald is given, TK U MLJ LV NV

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...