All Comments on 'Body Parts Haiku'

I enjoyed this and mentioned it over on the poetry forum <http://forum.literotica.com:81/forumdisplay.php?f=25> New Poems Review thread.

An idea: leave out the titles to add some mystery, and perhaps start at one end of the body, writing as you move.

Thanks for this.

Fly

for these, C83. Fly was right. They're quite delightful.

...these were extremely poetic, especially the earlobe-apricot-pierced-wormhole analogy. I know when I myself write haiku's, they often come out sounding silly rather than simplistically graceful. Excellent work!