by cheetah83
...these were extremely poetic, especially the earlobe-apricot-pierced-wormhole analogy. I know when I myself write haiku's, they often come out sounding silly rather than simplistically graceful. Excellent work!
for these, C83. Fly was right. They're quite delightful.
I enjoyed this and mentioned it over on the poetry forum <http://forum.literotica.com:81/forumdisplay.php?f=25> New Poems Review thread.
An idea: leave out the titles to add some mystery, and perhaps start at one end of the body, writing as you move.
Thanks for this.
Fly