All Comments on 'Break in Time'

"Break in Time" is by far the better of your two postings that appeared here on the 13th. I was at first going to remark on the use of 'pause' but then realized that having 'break' appear twice would be, at the very least, distractive. Glad to see you turned your comment on for this; one of those quirky things you have to watch for when submitting writings for posting.

you did a great job of this one.