by Jennifer C
As usual, your choice of words is brilliant, Jennifer. You have me looking out for your poetry, and getting excited with every new one when I find one.
I , too, look forward to being able to read your latest poem. You certainly have a flair for words.
Now that is my kind of breakfast Jennifer! Mmmmm
Very erotic poetry here,
Ravish me in jam delights
circulating seedy treats
in appetising areas of
intimate starvation.
I see great improvement in your writing and this is one very sexy highly erotic piece. Great imagery and a yummy flow!
Keep this babies cumming hun ~
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you do evoke such delight,
delicious,
and other carnal things,
shadow,
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I meant blushing <grin>...excellent tail, I mean poem. I ENJOYED this read ...(~_~)
Hey, it's my gushing buddy,
with a verse so hot;
serving up hot breakfast,
the kind best served supine.
<yum><slurp>
oh that is so good...
if that's your idea of a meal,
I'll never be late again!
Wonderful word choice here JC. You achieve a wonderful weaving of sensual pleasure combined with the basic need to be feed! I love how simplicity reigns here on many levels but seduction creates a complexity that holds the reader craving for more.
Nice write girl
du lac~
There is nothing like 'intimate starvation', though your poem comes very close.
I'm just discovering you now. You have a great talent and I enjoy your work!