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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Nice little write;

middle of the night

kitchen raid;

suddenly the stars shine bright

in a self-made cave...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hungry?

I loved the ending of this poem. All the artsy fooferal that preambles that vivid jaunt into a midnight kitchen wasn't attention grabbing, for me, at all.

Thanks for the smile!

Carrie

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
We Are What We Write

'peering into nothing we see everything'

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
inspiring words

there is nothing a human being hangs on to so firmly, indeed, than the whole of himself...seeking nothing ...we become undone...wisdom well penned..dear one...blue

swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
One of

those poems you read and sit back with a smile and say "Ahh..yes...that's it...that's it exactly".Well done, thank you! Will be adding this to my favorites in a moment.

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