by swallowedscream
...and seen it just like you did, unable to put my finger on it. Like you. Luscious. Rich. Evocative. Nice.
Thank you for the tour...BTW, I suspect that you have visited my neighborhood mall as well...
Poems as paintings are an art form in themselves. I particularly liked the fourth and fifth stanzas - they were truly vivid and had a fine rhythm.
A fun read and vividly descriptive — for ease of people watching, the mall can't be beat.