All Comments on 'Buffet'

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AnschulAnschulabout 16 years ago
Been there...

...and seen it just like you did, unable to put my finger on it. Like you. Luscious. Rich. Evocative. Nice.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
yummi....

Thank you for the tour...BTW, I suspect that you have visited my neighborhood mall as well...

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouabout 16 years ago
great detail

Poems as paintings are an art form in themselves. I particularly liked the fourth and fifth stanzas - they were truly vivid and had a fine rhythm.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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A fun read and vividly descriptive — for ease of people watching, the mall can't be beat.

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