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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE SUN DISCLOSES

allowing multitude to see. TK U MLJ LV NV

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years ago
Through thick or thin!

My favorite line is

" If you but let me smile into your eyes,"

I really connected with this poem.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Lovely echoes here

But you already know that. My favorite line:

"It's not the sun, but only man that pries."

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