All Comments on 'Butterfly Haiku 1'

by lonelyhousewife32

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oneiriaoneiriaover 10 years ago
A Master of Haiku

You are the master of the short poem. This one is also very beautiful.

theognistheognisabout 11 years ago
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I just have to comment again. I have never read a more beautiful haiku than this one. I wish I could give it a ten.

theognistheognisabout 11 years ago
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Beautiful.

Five.

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthor

Only time will tell

If the butterfly will fly

Or end in pieces

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Another well structured pleasure

Like the butterfly,

Will you be the crushed insect,

once he has used you?

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