All Comments on 'Candy Heart Kisses'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I love it-but the ending....is jarring!

It is so rhythmic, so NOT 20th Century in its mete. And then it comes to an abrupt end, where you use your imagination. I felt the protagonist's ambivalence would be resolved in a positive way, until the last line.

Great job-in a field where sap and bad taste often predominates, this is a very good poem!

capricious_chiccapricious_chicover 19 years agoAuthor
One of my favorites

Thanks for your comment.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
NOT SUGAR OR FAT FREE

different tastes from the same pot, TK U MLJ LV NV

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