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Less doodling and scribbling and more tightness and appreciation of form would make her howl more poetically. Smiles S.O.

.....appreciated comments... However, appreciation might be a subjective perspective... I will attempt to tighten up.... Again, I am honored to have illicit ed your constructive input... Thanks

i think you mean pendant- to hang, pendent is a piece of jewelry worn around the neck

lust's lactation- *this is a possessive, but is she pregnant or lactating? is this the word you want, I get it but don't really like it

tunnel vision- a med condition, appropriate word choice?

I like these three lines a lot "She howls in exhaustion at the full moon

Collapsing in a pool of wrought emotion

A canine act with an orgasmic boon|" boon is a nice word, a blessing

I would suggest working backward, keeping the lust aspect but cleaning up the language a bit so it resonates like the last 3 lines, don't hesitate to check meanings in a dictionary. spell check is not enough and makes errors--yes, don't sell doggy style short, although to rear end a big butt you better have an inch or two extra in that piston. Don't rush this stuff out, more time and you will put together some great stuff....

Erectus, once again I am humbled at your observations and appreciate your constructive insights.... i did mean 'pendent', it means ; jutting out, suspended from above, overhanging.... I do try to be congruent, and there are times when I miss the mark.... I appreciate your read and review reciprocation. Thank you!.