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Click hereAnd while you sleep,
remember me . . .
Drunk on fascination,
In love with complexity,
Compassionate, honest,
And enveloped in laughter
And as you awaken,
remember to . . .
Take in the world,
Embrace your challenges,
Open your heart,
And laugh, even if it's breaking
but so very true. Smile even when your heart is breaking. Tough advice, but advice that we all need to hear.
Great job!
~Honey
An influential piece on embracing each day with a positive outlook despite one's inner emotional battle.
....and well put. I particularly like the line "enveloped in laughter", but - personally - I'd drop the needless elipses, but that's just me nit-picking.
Tess
A compassionate wise poem on a subject matter that usually is filled with sorrow and tears. Not a shooting star but for some reason a poem that strikes to the essence of all .. and sticks there. Nicely done.
Du Lac~
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews
Wonderful poem,
beautifully written,
I loved
Open your heart,
And laugh, even if it's breaking
that really struck a chord for me,
lovely poem, well done.