All Comments on 'Chewing on it!'

Very good Art,

very funny and

interesting. A great

read to start my day!

Thanks.

~ J

Bubbilicous...o)) blue

Snapping and popping his way to Mensa! Loved the original thoughts here!

du~

for sale!!! i want some gummy balls too...*LOL* fantastic ending in those two last lines. very humorous......fine piece to chew on......don

Gum didn't help me quit smoking, damn it!

Good poem. I like it a lot! :)

So erotic huh? Well I was thinking of blowing mainly. :P

A nutty one from a crazy guy. Good work Art!

You have more writing talent, originality than any other writer. I have had the pleasure to know.

Satin

What can I say? Agree with below comments and end lines.

"I may not be the brightest color gum ball,

but perhaps one of the most colorful"

Does not reach for the "big moment"

Does not reek of pretension

Is not cloyingly self-important

Is consistent

Art, it is a pleasure

If you hadn't posted on the 'Dusty Poems' thread I wouldn't have noticed this.

Wonderful. What else can I say other than I'm going to rush out and buy some gum!

b'brig

So there it is,

the mystery's solved;

the peroxide blonde chews

with giggles galore

to heighten her mental acuity!