All Comments on 'Cold Comfort'

by tungtied2u

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent example of employment of alliteration; pulls the reader in just to continue to hear the sounds you've generated here.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
you did great with the alliteration

not too much, just enough to make it a great read.

*No longer using the thermometer.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
this is great

I love alliteration and this offers so much more. The frozen mind and thaw of imagination, or coming back to life after a cold spell. I can relate. Nice!

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
awesome!

i loved the way this flowed off my tongue, right to the very last drip! ~winks~

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