All Comments on 'Collecting Sunrises Haiku'

I think this is much the stronger of your two haikus. There is a thread between the lines that balances the enigmaticness (enigmaticity, enigmatism, enigma or whatever?).

I actually have no idea whether this fully obeys the rules of Haiku nor do I care too much - it works.

the moonrise quenches, TK U MLJ LV NV

Storm ! 5-ed .

This is beautiful and makes me very happy for you, personally.