by CeliaisAliena
a delicious pulse of sibilance throughout, like the swish of nanoseconds being brushed aside till the inevitable impact
so much going on with the phrasing it was a delight for me to read. thankyou.
in inimitable ovals, glitter-sprung
very nice
I had to reference back to the title
delicious snowball of doom, definitely caught my attention,
didn't like the ending, but it does tie in with snowball, solid write,
well done
good phrasing, word choice
Unseen, unnamed, atomic--
Your future lover, nemesis, anonymous
ending is a little too (anti?)climatic?
5ed