All Comments on 'Confession'

O-ne

d-elivers

e-rotic

e-xhilerating

e-xpressions

It is just your way. Let these expressions flow and flow to treat us. Even your so called "non-erotic" poetry has the sensuality and sensitivity to make it erotic. You stroke the mind.

. . . is there a man who is not "guilty" of such sins. Odeee adds to them a dimension much above the ordinary by baring his soul, or should I say, our soul?

Few sound so sincere in their expressions of love.

What range of emotions he portrays in such succint manner. The content and the craft are true complements to each other.

four steps up for your wording and strong feelings, couldn't take you to 5 because of all the of's. I cannot say I "love" a poem that has so many repeated opening words. Some may, I do not.

The sins of Onan revealed.

The sins of Onan revealed.