by demure101
as always
not unpleasant
two negatives to make a positive?
along the silent streets and sleeping squares -
best line
the quiet night, its ghostliness enhanced
worst line, technically correct, but enhancing ghostliness seems like an oxymoron, and I get the feeling you should be showing me not telling me
LET us go then, you and I...
Like a patient etherized upon a table;
yes, I think
your usage is quite correct, but has a rather abhorrent ring as an the EOL, now that may be your intent, but it did come off as rather comical to me, suggest either a slight shift, or rewording to get the -liness out of ghost