All Comments on 'Cricket'

the ending does not fit this poem-- it is awful. Fucking bugs and little girls (or at least the illusion of it just turned my stomach) Maybe I am misreading the lines. The rest has promise, is quite good, which is why I wrote this at all

between this afternoon and dawn I will certainly note this as among my favorite of today's poems. Oh, I just noticed what another seemed to infer. I didn't see that at all, or as what you meant. Funny isn't it, how we all bring our own issues to different works... thanks for the smile.

If I had not read the comment, I would have never thought about "fucking bugs and little girls." Anyway, I enjoyed the poem -- my interpretation of it.