All Comments on 'Cricket'

If I had not read the comment, I would have never thought about "fucking bugs and little girls." Anyway, I enjoyed the poem -- my interpretation of it.

between this afternoon and dawn I will certainly note this as among my favorite of today's poems. Oh, I just noticed what another seemed to infer. I didn't see that at all, or as what you meant. Funny isn't it, how we all bring our own issues to different works... thanks for the smile.

the ending does not fit this poem-- it is awful. Fucking bugs and little girls (or at least the illusion of it just turned my stomach) Maybe I am misreading the lines. The rest has promise, is quite good, which is why I wrote this at all