All Comments on 'Cruel Intentions'

An inner dialog, bouncing back and forth. A poem asking and answering it's own question, but every answer just another affirmation of the doubt.

It's an interresting concept that I believe could work very well. But for some reason, I can't seem to engage myself in the situation described.

Regardless, it was an interresting attempt. Keep writing.

keep writiing!! your images here are much better than your other poem offered today, more intelligent, and the inner dialogue would make it even stronger with some tightening up of paragraphs in relation to certain phrasing..keep it up. and we'll all get to watch you grow here :) maria

Thank you both for your comments. I enjoyed writing this poem and i enjoy writing period. I have over 100 poems written and 30 or so stories. Some I submit and others I do not. But I do love to write. It helps to hear something back about what we write so again thank you both for saying something to me.

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