All Comments on 'Cruinne'

What a nice wake-up call;

another of cymry's pithy writes.

A profound little poem. Read it and be awed.

in vision is shape and form in order to absorb the write of this excellent literary creation. (~_*)

and it's nice and tight......nicely done.....don

You take words, toss the, flip them then

confuse them. The words ... confused.

I love how you paint with your words. Your imagery is always tight and perfect. Seems to be right on, everytime. I love it !!!

I mean that. You have a style that leaves me in awe, and I am honored to see it at work on the threads and here ... Just amazing~!!

not a word wasted in this little masterwork!

very clever..nothing wasted not even space...blue

I understand Cruinne to mean "World", and the shape of the poem is not a circle, spiral, orb or anything else, it is... the World!

I particularly like the phrase "discharging ideals from

the static where they hide" - it is very evocative. "A spark exhumes the dead dreams of hope into a new living future for the world!)

Am I reading something into your poem? It is so compact yet complex!

Beautifully told as all your poems are!