All Comments on 'Cusp'

gorgeous imp. ethereal...left me smiling.

more, imp...please

*hugs*

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What a lovley poem.

I was taken away, swept, carried, submerged into another world. Just loved the your wording. The imagery was silky smooth. More Please~~

and now I have a huge lump in my throat. Bravo!!

and each piece a building block on the previous stanza. Wonderful word choices , and sentiment I can share. You got me.

Touching, Imp.

Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the poetry board.

*No thermometer rating

Are my glasses steamed over, or is there some smoldering eroticism here?

Very nice, imp!

flowed like a soothing water fall trickling from wisdom pool to tranquil wisdom pool to tiny rippled pool...grin

great poem!

I loved this.. walks the reader from the innocent love to the depths of all that we dream and hope for to be real...loved that last stanza thank you for writing this!

for voluptuous, sensuous, moving language, and this has them all. It gathered me, drew me in, and made me feel everything you feel. Incredible piece of writing.

The affirmation of love and life, the joy of the present, the anticipation of the future. Very touching.

Nicely worded. Well thought out thsnx