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CUSP

There is love
as foundation for the passion.
That much is certain
as I soar in the radiance of her smile.

There is trust
as extension of that love.
My soul is naked
yet I fear not this vulnerability.

There is hunger
as her vicarious touch
is carried through my own hands
and mine through hers.

There is respect
for divergent thought
and convergent desire
on the cusp of omneity.

There is thirst
for a taste of tomorrow.
The promise of delight
and the delight of promise.

There is hope
for the exquisite someday
when the fire in her eyes
overpowers the barriers in her mind.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Nicely worded. Well thought out thsnx

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wonderful

The affirmation of love and life, the joy of the present, the anticipation of the future. Very touching.

matriarchmatriarchover 19 years ago
I am a total sucker

for voluptuous, sensuous, moving language, and this has them all. It gathered me, drew me in, and made me feel everything you feel. Incredible piece of writing.

Du LacDu Lacover 19 years ago
Sultry passion .. wow

I loved this.. walks the reader from the innocent love to the depths of all that we dream and hope for to be real...loved that last stanza thank you for writing this!

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Impressive~

flowed like a soothing water fall trickling from wisdom pool to tranquil wisdom pool to tiny rippled pool...grin

great poem!

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Why does this one seem so kinky to me?

Are my glasses steamed over, or is there some smoldering eroticism here?

Very nice, imp!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
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Your poem is mentioned on the new poems review thread on the poetry board.

*No thermometer rating

cantdogcantdogover 19 years ago
All trembly

Touching, Imp.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Very nicely presented

and each piece a building block on the previous stanza. Wonderful word choices , and sentiment I can share. You got me.

sacksackover 19 years ago
the last stanza really got me....

and now I have a huge lump in my throat. Bravo!!

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