All Comments on 'Dark Fantasy'

You had me worried, though excited all along. Wonderful twist.

At first I was a bit surprised at the brutality and violence of the poem. Your words vividly capture the character's tense range of emotions and actions. The last 2 paragraphs, and especially the last two lines, change the whole meaning of the poem, adding depth and a more positive sense of realism. Although even without the final paragraphs this would have been a well-written poem, the ending makes this poem truly exceptional.

Loved It!!!!!!!! You definitely captured the essence of a forced sexual scene....MORE!!! MORE!!!!