All Comments on 'Darkening Hope'

yet passionate plea. Achy and evocative of a desperate yearning. I like, I like. Thank you. LJ

...hugs to ya Dar! Love ya! ~Minx

I felt the emotions clearly in this wonderful poem

A moving expression of yearning and passion.

Very strong emotions ripple through this poem.. I felt so alone, so needing to be loved.. and unvieled fear.. nice work

Du~

deep emotion...well portrayed :)

...and you made the 4-1-4 layout work well. I like this line...

"I hide within the lies I've told"