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by oneiria
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buttersabout 13 years agothere's a sensuality included...
in this write that lifts it above plain porn and brings it into the realm of the erotic. you still flirt a little too heavily (imo) with the hackneyed phrases, but the focus on sensuality (with the sight-deprivation) fights to save this write.
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