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sandspikeabout 20 years agoKinda sad
You need to get up earlier and drink beer with the sunrise.
Write us a love or happy poem. It did read well for me.
jthserraabout 20 years agoA dark poem...
overall pretty good. I think if you trimmed this one some you could make something special. Read it outloud with a mind to say what you mean with less words.
jim :)
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