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in New Poetry Recommendations

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I did not say why, nor will I do it here

let them parse it, which probably you should do too, there, in good poetry, is something else besides the surface read through, which you seem to do too much of

5ed of course

after the wake up and rest, you will just be further away but with a paddle TK U MLJ LV NV

...are those that leave us with a smile. And hope is a smile-maker, isn't it? :) You've got some lovely, lively images here -- a picture-perfect poem for a picture perfect daydream!

so neatly crafted in an elegance of pentameter as to let us slide along on the river's current, half-drowsed and dreamy, midsummered.