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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Nice

"Shame looks like furs on her. Elegant and cruel."

"became like artificial light: inescapable but replaced often"

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Furs on her. Elegant & cruel : is there an allusion to

Venus in Furs ?!

susansnowsusansnowover 10 years agoAuthor
Allusions

There's an allusion more to "Story of the Eye." Perhaps there's a taste of Severin but mostly Simone and Marcelle from Bataille's work.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
your works confuse the hell out of me most of the time

but when I see 'em I always read. good to see you.

susansnowsusansnowover 10 years agoAuthor
Hi Harry!

Thanks for your feedback. Just message me if you ever want to know the "truth" behind the piece. Or if it something I've dreamed up in a haze...

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Single female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...