All Comments on 'Death Culture'

by quietpoet

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounding almost bitter

Perhaps with a touch of cynical;

A hard-edged look

At our world today;

Might make you want to

Talk to your imaginary friend.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Throw them out through the windows!

If only more and more poems as this one could entice us, not to talk to our own imaginary friend, as the previous poster suggests, but maybe to each other. Maybe to even cry: “I am sick and tired, and I am not going to take it anymore!” Thank you for daring to be relevant. Touching what really hurts, and pushing people out of their comfort zone!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
"we sit and watch"

QP, More, encore <grin I have to say this one gripped my soul and I was engulfed in your literary journey (~_~) Excellent poem! (in my opinion) Thanks for an intriguing Trail of words.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
powerful

Excellent message. Thank you for the read

du

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