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Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
this

would have been a good poem if my mind could overlook the mistakes. absent punctuation and misspelled words. Please, poets, please, edit your work! It is such a shame to see a good one get a back click because of carelessness.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
ONE WAY I FEEL

for you and us TK U MLJ LV NV

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