by SlaveToCock
Okay, for those with such tastes, here are some more writings from the Men's Room wall...
Dirty was not the problem for me. First there were many lines which had too many syllables. You have to imagine reading them really fast to make it work
Second, in a Limerick you build a surprise which hits you at the last line. There was none of it here.
Third, IMO, the best way to make it really dirty is not to flaunt four letter words every other line but suggest them so that the readers create them in their minds.
I love limericks and wanted to give you an honest feedback, not to discourage you.
Welcome to Raunchyville ~ a few dirty limericks to greet your arrival ~ more news at 11:00.