All Comments on 'Divorced'

A very powerful poem about a very powerful subject. Divorce brings out a dichotomy of feelings and so does your poem. 5+. Well done!

and has about it that certain misfocusing of dreams- that 'awake again and again', and 'awakening still', speak to anyone who's experienced its oddity.

the end is so drab, so ... mundane, it works as a foil to what goes before. some might deny its poetics, but it smacks of reality.