All Comments on 'Do You'

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Ok it's

sappy but I love this:

~When the radio plays your favorite,

does our forever filter through?

Witnessing entwined hands of lovers,

do you see this tomorrow as ours? ~

that's nice

Thank you

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Lovely

Sappy, no. Touching. We need more honest moments that feel like this. Thank you.

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