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wether one agrees or not, it is a pleasure to see a point of view so detailed and in conflict with societal views. In law we use the expression, "you take your victim as you find them," and I guess you must take your sexual partners the same way. Different treatment for different people. Some like a cock in the mouth to excite them, other may like the spank, still other like both (although spanking someone with your cock in their mouth may not be advisable).

The poem is a little rough in spots, i.e "my friend" is obviously not needed as you have the reader's rap attention. I would continue but some guy with a knife is gaining on me...in any event very well done!

Agreement or disagreement and maybe a healthy dose of discussion on the topic. If I had started listing all sexual preferences as proof of women not being fragile well, I'd have written an essay haha, as always your comments are most welcome. Please feel free to put in any other mistakes or things you think need fixing. I am new to this writing game and all insights are helpfull

Brother , agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments !!

Blood-vessels in a lady's ass is directly connected to her ladyship's clitoris so spankin' them buns sure shoots them over the edge de Orgasm !!!!

Ah, this is a topic that always gets me in trouble. I do agree with some of your views on the "castration" of men. Hidden in the midst of a just cause is the vilification of male sexuality, and even of the entire gender.

...and here is where I'll cut it short. :) Anyway. Good read, thanks.

This has good bones. You should revisit it with the more experienced eyes/ears that you show in you later work. Ignoring what women do or do not want, which varies so widely, we should not be treading on the masculine in order to propel the feminine. I may have missed it but I believe a reworking of this would be a great basis for a masculine/feminine thread. Please note I did not use vs. as I hate the whole "war between the sexes". We're two sides of the same coin, it's self depreciating to chisel away pieces on any front.

is in the mind of the beholdee. TK U MLJ LV NV

This caused many conflicting emotions for me. Strength is so appealing..as long as it doesn't prey on weakness. A real man will see weakness or vulnerability in a woman and will lend her his strength, build her up. It's the males who pretend to be real - or don't even give a crap, who thump their chests and say, "I am a gift to woman" those are the ones that cause fear in the heart of a woman.

But, real men are human all the same, and the pain or humiliation they can also feel is clear in the beginning of the poem. I guess we all have a bit of weakness in us.