All Comments on 'Down on the Shore'

Under the pier: so very old England. Love it, especially the evocative keening cries.

I like the transition in imagery.

a really strong image with sound and sense made clear to the reader. :-)

My favorite subgenre of erotic poetry. Well done, UYS.

but I loved the poem :)

I love the short simplicity, and the evocative images. I had to give it a 5.

Creating your own fireworks way more fun than watching them.

Only the soaring gulls

echo back

my keening cries.

so much information in so few lines.