All Comments on 'Dreaded Dark'

by AnnaVenus69

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Many FeathersMany Feathersabout 18 years ago
Oh Anna...my Anna

I do remain...Your Many Feathers. I too share in that hope, you've given that to me. The gloom and fear I have at times that fate will be cruel to us, is chased away by your smile, the warmth of your eyes as I look at you, and by the love that you hold dear.

May that dark become the sunrise of our love.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

what does it mean? (~_~) there are some gripping and touching lines but I didn't get the full impact of the poem. Like a dream that flows by with no real substance. Look forward to reading more from you, thanks for sharing.

VolupiaVolupiaabout 18 years ago
your poems always seem to move from dark to light

from despair to hope, from loneliness to love. Very well done, Anna, keep them coming (xxx)

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 18 years ago
~~

Another joyous expression

Here unfolds

Of love's power

To bring light

And lighten life's load.

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