All Comments on 'Dreaming Of Sargasso'

....effort from a new poet (I think). Wonderful reading. Keep it coming!

Drifted, floated, sailed, flowed, carried my mind in a ride of words. Definetely a pleasurable read, the words barked poeticly. Thanks

I'm glad you submitted this one, Randi. Ooh, does this mean the thread is completely free for threadjacking now? ;)

I see you made slight edits before submitting. It's very good.

you take a reader and meander from alone and lost to embraced and safe, very beautiful

I love it when brilliant new poets show up on our doorstep. Wonderful words!

you're very talented..

it's wonderful to have someone there to sooth us when we have bad dreams.

geez, i'm never going to get packed if i keep coming back to LE..i think i'm hooked.

The flow of the words makes it feel like a dream. "Caught by doldrum, drifted" so captures the way dreams shift.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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