All Comments on 'Dreaming Of Sargasso'

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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The flow of the words makes it feel like a dream. "Caught by doldrum, drifted" so captures the way dreams shift.

you're very talented..

it's wonderful to have someone there to sooth us when we have bad dreams.

geez, i'm never going to get packed if i keep coming back to LE..i think i'm hooked.

I love it when brilliant new poets show up on our doorstep. Wonderful words!

you take a reader and meander from alone and lost to embraced and safe, very beautiful

I see you made slight edits before submitting. It's very good.

I'm glad you submitted this one, Randi. Ooh, does this mean the thread is completely free for threadjacking now? ;)

Drifted, floated, sailed, flowed, carried my mind in a ride of words. Definetely a pleasurable read, the words barked poeticly. Thanks

....effort from a new poet (I think). Wonderful reading. Keep it coming!