All Comments on 'Drunk,'

the false aphrodisiac

you wake up the next day, look at puffy eyes in the mirror

and the shit storm called life is still there

since I can relate, it struck a chord

imho, you might smooth it out some

didn't care for the word 'really', nor the effect you tried with ',like'

but again, just my opinion

you have good content and the reference is perfect (seventy-five books)

to comment on this, except to say Buk could be funny as hell, so I'll just say I left a 5.

I like the way you portray the justification in quick, flowing lines that race right into the repudiation of all that has gone before and leaving me pleasantly aware that there is no bullshit clouding the writer's reality