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by rubyslipper

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
I liked this, Ruby

The fear and aching heart and their result seemed real

TsothaTsothaover 10 years ago

Ah, that last stanza... Really beautiful image. My very first thought was to think that it stood taller than the rest of the poem, but what precedes it is a necessary buildup. Very good!

kokshurkokshurover 10 years ago
applause

did you hear that? if you listened carefully. applause

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
*****

Five.

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