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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
liking this

wonder if the reduction of pronouns would enhance?? Not qualified but engaged

oneiriaoneiriaover 11 years ago
Very well done

I loved the use of language and imagery in this poem.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
NATURE AT ITS BEST WORST

what bounds will it hold and surpass. TK U MLJ LV NV

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1. Now that I think about it, this username is kind of cheesy, but hey, it's all I got. 2. Hope you enjoy my stories- I'm a pretty amateur writer though I'm working on it. (As shown by my lengthy gaps between posts, sorry all!) 3. I love to hear comments/constructive critici...