All Comments on 'elusive'

Very clever.

clever and well written

~Syn

Very well put

spirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired <grin>

spirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired <grin>

work and point taken. I like this:

"I can see the ghost through the window

even on the sunny days."

A whole poem could easily be written to that quote.

and very clever it is.....i love this:

does my poetry submit

or does my pen hold the key to submission?

great work........don

on interpretations and observations. There's nothing elusive about the imnpressions of this piece.