All Comments on 'Endless'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Been there, done that ~ and it doesn't have to be;

Most of these things drag on for an hour and more

But I've seen them done quite ruthlessly in 15 minutes

{cutting out all the useless ego stroking}.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
poetic point

scribed with lead, dragged across a page... or tapped out on a key board; in sync with the ticking <grin nice write

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I think

all writers and artists can relate to this. An enjoyed read. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
sort of funny because

you used the names of my nephew ( stephen) my daughter ( amanda), her BF ( jason) and one close to my youngest child.( kristen) are you in my bizarro universe? :D

I get tired of the noise too

;)

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
distracted.

Distraction ~ if you have a family ~ it could happen to you. Delightful Read.

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