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by Kimmypeach72
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f-cynyrover 18 years agohard realty.
nice use of repetition, and a good strong ending. i enjoyed the poem and can identify with the eyes open.
duddle146over 17 years agoreality intrudes
Experiencing a dream so real ~ the shock is waking up to reality.
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