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by tatiana_on_a_leash

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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
I like this.

I like this. There is flow and a nice progression. I particularly liked the ‘inevitably, necessarily’ and the final ‘I will learn the way’. I have absolutely no idea what the way is that will be learnt but it makes such a great triumphal ending.

I look forward to seeing more from you.

Very stylish user name by the way.

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