All Comments on 'Fairy Tale Ending'

alight on earth to mesmerize. TK U MLJ LV NV

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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nicely done.

absolutley wonderful.

a bedtime story

betide the times

warm whispered words

with smiling ryhmes

a wink of the eye

a turn of the cheek

from under your cover

you playfully sneak

morals tomorrow

with sunrise bright

come here my dear

and kiss me goodnight.

-mao

by your creativity !!!

I really loved it , and

the punch at the end,

oh yes,....very good !!

But I agree with LeBroz, LOL

*winks* , damn creative !

-sGp-

cute

.....is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

A 5 for all the allusions!

A cute little piece

from the guise of a kittyn;

on closer look, we see

a hot little faerie...