All Comments on 'Falling'

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Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Really enjoyed this!

A great read, loved your wording

maybe tomorrow maybe today

struggling arrangements of favored array.

striving to please and striving to meet

the endless destrustion of love's first defeat.

An excellent ending to a powerful poem ~ J

English LadyEnglish Ladyabout 19 years ago
Evocative.

my title says it all really :)

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