All Comments on 'Fancy'

could happen in the laundry. TK U MLJ LV NV

would have preferred more of a leap, less lead,

Not that she cares

now.

Now, as the phone rings

just shy of desire (her is redundant, implied.)

where the mind wanders while doing something mundane like folding laundry. This was an excellent way to get into the erotica. I could have done without "That's not all he stretches," which seems slightly vulgar in an erotic poem that is otherwise surprisingly delicate. I gave you a five, but you should also get a spanking for not fixing some of the proofreading errors, like "her's" instead of "hers" and the wandering verb tenses. But you'd like that, wouldn't you? :D

Nice to read you again, my friend. xo